The Shooting

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The Shooting

Post by ChelseaJoblin on Mon Jul 27, 2015 12:09 pm

The shooting came really unexpected to me because the girls were getting ready like normal people and then they’re at the shops and then boom the Korean guy got shot and killed.

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Re: The Shooting

Post by emilyyy on Mon Jul 27, 2015 12:11 pm

I think you should off put more detail into it

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